I hope this wont piss anyone off, but many of you guys are English-speakers and Im not. And still its about music and lyrics by a Sting-fan so its kind of related to the list anyway. I just wrote some lyrics (below) and Id like some input on it (both language and content). Goodbye Denise I leave you now I leave you before we met Goodbye is easy now Nothing done, no regrets Believe me my heart will never leave Itll always lay open and bleed Like Jesus bled on the cross for us Ill always bleed for what never was And in my mind youll always stay So in that sense well never part ways I can not decide what would be the worst To leave you right now or let you leave first To tell you I love you and scare you away Or just do nothing, let you lead the way Here in my mind where youll always stay There are so many things youll never say Some of them good, but most of them bad In my mind youll always be glad Ill take all my feelings, put them in a box And Ill lock them up with a thousand locks Always within you, theyre yours if you please You have been blessed with a thousand keys Ill tell you a riddle, Ill give you clue Ill give you the answer, its you Take half of my mother, or my sister indeed Switch that with the second of the line in the lead This town will always remind me of you Thats where you fell, thats where you smiled, Thats where you smiled at me waiting in line. How can it be Im in love with this idea The idea of you being good all the way through And the idea of me, being someone youd see Tell me what you think! Cheers, Patrik