Page 1, 2nd paragraph: I don't believe that the Solstice Party is always held on the second Tuesday of December. I know that last one was held on the second Saturday and note that next year's will also be on a Saturday. Last line of page 1 lists Kevin Bushnell as a SPOC Advisory Committee member but has no contact information. Is this correct? Page 3, under "Advanced Training Sessions" is a gramatical error. It should read "ALL MEMBERS ARE WELCOME AND ARE ENCOURAGED TO ATTEND" Page 4, bottom paragraph under "SPOC Key Holder Status": It might be a good idea to mention how much the annual SPOC User fee is. Page 5, SLAS Constitution Article 3 Meetings The sentence should either read: "A. A regularly scheduled general meeting..." or "A. Regularly scheduled general meetings..." That all I can see. Rest looks okay to me. Mike Wilson --- On Sun, 12/20/09, Patrick Wiggins <paw@wirelessbeehive.com> wrote: From: Patrick Wiggins <paw@wirelessbeehive.com> Subject: [Utah-astronomy] Any suggestions? To: "utah astronomy utah astronomy listserve" <utah-astronomy@mailman.xmission.com> Date: Sunday, December 20, 2009, 6:09 PM Hi all, The SLAS member information file is in the process of being updated for the new year. I've already emailed SLAS members asking for input. But it occurred to me that it might be helpful to get input from non-SLASers who might look at the document with "fresh eyes". Especially those with an interest in astronomy (everyone here) who might have questions about SLAS that are not answered by the 2009 version of the document which is available to all on the SLAS website. So please have a look at the draft of the 2010 version and let me know about anything you think should be added, removed, reworded and so on. I'd even like to hear about simple misspellings: http://users.wirelessbeehive.com/~paw/slas/NEWMEM2010DRAFT.PDF Many thanks, patrick Lame Duck SLAS Sec/Treas (only 11 days left until Joe "gets" to take over <g>) _______________________________________________ Utah-Astronomy mailing list Utah-Astronomy@mailman.xmission.com http://mailman.xmission.com/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/utah-astronomy Visit the Photo Gallery: http://www.slas.us/gallery2/main.php Visit the Wiki: http://www.utahastronomy.com