I hope
this won't piss anyone off, but many of you guys are English-speakers and I'm
not. And still it's about music and lyrics by a Sting-fan so it's kind of
related to the list anyway. I just wrote some lyrics (below) and I'd like some
input on it (both language and content).
Goodbye Denise I leave you
now
I leave you before we
met
Goodbye is easy
now
Nothing done, no
regrets
Believe me my heart will
never leave
It'll always lay open and
bleed
Like Jesus bled on the cross
for us
I'll always bleed for what
never was
And in my mind you'll always
stay
So in that sense we'll never
part ways
I can not decide what would
be the worst
To leave you right now or
let you leave first
To tell you I love you and
scare you away
Or just do nothing, let you
lead the way
Here in my mind where you'll
always stay
There are so many things
you'll never say
Some of them good, but most
of them bad
In my mind you'll always be
glad
I'll take all my feelings,
put them in a box
And I'll lock them up with a
thousand locks
Always within you, they're
yours' if you please
You have been blessed with a
thousand keys
I'll tell you a riddle, I'll
give you clue
I'll give you the answer,
it's you
Take half of my mother, or
my sister indeed
Switch that with the second
of the line in the lead
This town will always remind
me of you
That's where you fell,
that's where you smiled,
That's where you smiled at
me waiting in line.
How can it be
I'm in love with this
idea
The idea of you being good
all the way through
And the idea of me, being
someone you'd see
Tell me
what you think!
Cheers,
Patrik