Sounds like it's going to be a good one. You could probably give it a little more space. I think it was Charlie Mingus that said it's not the notes that are important, it's the space between the notes. Also I couldn't understand the vocals. I'd leave the fx like they are but bring the dry vox up a few db. This is often a problem with stuff you've worked on for a while: you're so used to hearing what she's saying that you still hear it even though to a new listener it's buried behind the fx. Other than that keep tweaking and arranging. I wouldn't make it much longer, though. If you're going to add some other parts in you should take some sections out. While we're on this, I've got a remix I did of the new FSOL song up on acidplanet. I'm going to pull it down either tonight or tomorrow because I'm going to enter it in a contest. Before I do, though, does anyone have any suggestions for it? http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=225430&T=791431