I've not had a lot of time to work on this so just some thoughts on the first part of the edit:

> on the editing issue - I tried to cut down the original mix of WTIL to somewhere between 3

> and 4 minutes. Let me know what you think and where it could improve.

That'll be a hard one as it's so repetitive yet subtly different. I'm approaching this as if I were to edit it myself, so we'll probably argue (good naturally) over a few points.

My first thought would be to launch into the meat of the track early on - cutting out everything from about 16s to 57sec. Keep a little of the intro, but then the beat kicks in early on. It sounds like you compressed the first minute into about 30s, which is more pleasing to listen to.

I think, however, your edit into what I call the meat of the track at 32s sounds a little abrupt but I've messed with it and I'm not sure how to make to sound smoother with what you've done to the first half minute of the track. In that respect I think my edit works better; more natural sounding.

More later.

-paul