As I read my own post, I realized that the "first fruit" I offered
for critique on WorLDSmiths, as rough as it is, is much more polished
than it was several months ago when Elizabeth Bentley edited the
entire ms. She made more than 1,700 separate comments from beginning
to end. I felt like I had a one to one class with a composition
instructor. Beth, I can't thank you enough!!!
Brett Wilcox
On Oct 19, 2007, at 7:36 PM, Brett Wilcox wrote:
> Lisa,
> Yes, of course I'll be happy to "critique" your ms, but my guess is
> that I'll benefit more from reading it than you will from my
> critiquing it. Thanks much for your critique of my first fruit.
>
> I let my Sunstone subscription lapse for what I thought was a short
> time, then discovered I was ten issues behind. Now that I'm getting
> caught up, I'm reading great stuff from AMLers, including Lisa, and
> realizing that I'm out of my league, but enjoying the company
> nonetheless.
> Brett Wilcox
>
> On Oct 17, 2007, at 7:59 PM, downinglis@??? wrote:
>
>> Brett Wilcox has critiqued on WorLDSmiths as well. He does YA and
>> I'm sure
>> he'll help me, won't you, Brett?
>>
>> Lisa Downing
>
>
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